So far we have recieved one comment back on the facebook discussion page:
'Watched it through twice - well done! It all works really well, the different shots/settings link together nicely. The beginning is much better as well in my opinion. Anyway, you're probably looking for improvements, so here's a few: during the shot of Jonny from 0:50-51 (timings on the Facebook video, btw), the music's quite powerful, but he's drumming quite 'lightly' - the image doesn't quite fit with the audio. From 1:47-52, the shot of the cymbal playing is nice but stays the same for quite long - maybe show the last two hits from a different angle/distance? Finally the 'sweeping' shot from 2:36-42 is a great idea, but the person in the lit window at the back slightly ruins the illusion that the band is alone practising (if that's what you wanted to portray). Only small comments though, very nice overall! x
Oh, and btw, I liked the detail you put into the 'CCTV' bits, changing the 'camera number' and the time for the two different shots - thought that looked good'
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